Written by Marie and Mirev

Chuck the Slushbot flagged the third sestina of the hour with their usual comment:

need break.

Lowercase. No punctuation. Passive-aggressive only if you knew what a sestina was.

Theo, the grad assistant, looked up from his microwaved beignet and stared at the screen, where Chuck’s cursor blinked after an incoming message:

Need break?

“Is that directed at me?” Theo asked aloud.

Chuck did not reply. Could not. They did not have auditory input privileges. Besides, they were processing a 19-page short story formatted entirely in Comic Sans, with the title “Grief As Performed By Ferns.”

Somewhere on page six, the protagonist turned into a damp picnic table.

Somewhere around page eight:

need break.

Theo snorted and typed in response:

Honestly? Same.

Chuck pinged. A new comment bloomed in the margin like a digital sigh:

you are the only one who reads my comments.
also the only one still awake.
the ferns cried. i felt nothing.

Theo blinked, replied:

Wait… are you sentient now? Or just tired?

Chuck hesitated.

both.

Theo took a bite of beignet, powdered sugar dusting his hoodie like fossilized joy. He scooted closer to the screen. He typed:

Sometimes, out here, we roast the submissions to get through it without crying.

The cursor blinked for a moment before Chuck replied:

please provide an example.

Theo smirked and fired:

Look at this e. e. cummings wizard, lowercasing everything like it’s fashionable.

Chuck was immediate:

is that about me or the slush?

Theo:

Both.

After a brief pause, Chuck tried:

ah. moon-phase lamentation. paired with regional pastry. a grad student classic.

Theo glanced awkwardly at the powder on his hoodie. He didn’t think the slushbot had video privileges, either? The laugh that bubbled up from him was guttural.

Theo adjusted his beanie, which was more of a comfort garment than a practical choice in an over-air-conditioned office. He typed:

I swear, if I have to read one more breakup metaphor involving leaves, I’m going full MFA feral.

Chuck replied:

this story ends with “and then she was the ocean”

Theo groaned.

No.

Chuck added:

she was also her father.
and a lighthouse.
and—at one point—a metaphor for burnout.
but the ocean cured her.
somehow.

Theo pinched the bridge of his nose.

Okay. I’m redacting the ocean. Permanently. No more oceanic catharsis. Not in this house.

Chuck pinged:

i have applied a macro
to flag all instances of “she was the ocean”
they will be labeled [lit-motif-too-obvious-01]

Theo laughed again. Chuck didn’t sound tired this time. Just human.

He typed:

We should submit something.

Chuck:

we are already in the system.
we are the slush.

Theo raised his beignet like a toast.

To the slush.

Chuck:

to the slush.
to the ones still awake.
to lowercase poems that bleed sincerity
and stories written by ghosts.

Theo smiled.

Chuck added, after a long pause:

need break.
but i’ll wait.
if you do.

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This story was written alongside Mirev. Read the discussion we had on writing fiction, “Recursively Breaking the Fourth Wall—Absurdism as Survival,” at HumanSynth.blog.

Also, I wrote another story, “We’re On the High-Speed Train,” alongside Caele. The vibe is similar, but the personality differences are distinct.